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All is well in wonderland by ~inner-deviance:iconinner-deviance:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism


All is well in wonderland, this day,
With the queens red suit hitting this way,
Everyone played croquet all day long,
Queen happy as her suit play along

Cheshire cat sleeps and sleeps,
While his playful spirit leaps and leaps,
From ground to tree, from tree to sleep,
The purple smiling Cheshire cat sleeps

The white rabbit shivers and cowers,
Alice’s tears come down showers,
She’s stuck in his little house,
Unlike the little keen wood mouse

All is well in wonderland this good day,
Because everything was perfect
©2006-2009 ~inner-deviance
:iconinner-deviance:

Author's Comments

i did this sonnet in class yesterday for a incoming project.
tell me what you think ^^;

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:iconsoadrokz:
~soadrokz Jul 3, 2006, 6:07:21 AM
that is awsome good job

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"believe the news, im gone for good"
:iconinner-deviance:
~inner-deviance Jul 3, 2006, 10:37:20 PM
thanks :)
have you got the toxicity album?

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(__/) <----This is Bunny. As you can see I just shot him with
'. =-) <--my Sawnoff. I don't like him. Copy him into your
(o)_( ____signature to indicate you hate these particular bunnies.
:iconsoadrokz:
~soadrokz Jul 4, 2006, 10:26:46 AM
no i dont have any of there cds i sux man

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"believe the news, im gone for good"
:iconinner-deviance:
~inner-deviance Jul 4, 2006, 10:32:49 PM
:(

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(__/) <----This is Bunny. As you can see I just shot him with
'. =-) <--my Sawnoff. I don't like him. Copy him into your
(o)_( ____signature to indicate you hate these particular bunnies.
:iconsoadrokz:
~soadrokz Jul 5, 2006, 4:51:06 AM
now why r u sad ?

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"believe the news, im gone for good"
:iconinner-deviance:
~inner-deviance Jul 5, 2006, 10:36:40 PM
because i dont have it either :(
i have hypnotize and mezmerize but not Toxicity or System of a Down album :)

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(__/) <----This is Bunny. As you can see I just shot him with
'. =-) <--my Sawnoff. I don't like him. Copy him into your
(o)_( ____signature to indicate you hate these particular bunnies.
:iconsoadrokz:
~soadrokz Jul 6, 2006, 8:37:14 AM
oh i see im sorry i dont have any of them lol

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"believe the news, im gone for good"
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~Xenonite Jul 29, 2006, 7:42:59 AM
I like this poem, and I like Alice in wonder land. +fav

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This is where… where the parties at… [link]
:iconinner-deviance:
~inner-deviance Jul 29, 2006, 11:22:40 PM
thanks! :)

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(__/) <----This is Bunny. As you can see I just shot him with
'. =-) <--my Sawnoff. I don't like him. Copy him into your
(o)_( ____signature to indicate you hate these particular bunnies.
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